BROOKLYN
I'm Merking You With No Threat, You're A Weak Vet Running A Slow Mile
So Merciful With Bleak Text EnVy Feared Personals So You Reset Ya Whole Profile
nice personal & punch

Behold Ya Record's Ashy, He Has Minimum Genes Therefore He Folds His Baggies
So Called Pimp, Permed With Hemp. .But Isn't This The Shrimp Who Stole His Avy?
great personal, the wordplay was there

Promoteless Fig, Like Crack I'll Smoke This Twig, Followed Me & Quotes His Sig.
With A Small Rhyme His Kin Must Be Sheep, Supposedly His G.reatest O.f A.ll T.ime Is Big
a little played but sheep line made it better, great personal & wordplay!

I Don't Care When I Fight Faces On The Right Cases, I'm Takin Envy's Place In 5 Paces
Even Your Text Is Red Necked But I'll Put You To Choke Like Pares Of Tight Laces
great punch with wordplay

I'll Throw Spits At This Dude Cus I'm All Heat Even The Scripts That I Use
But How Is EnVy Gonna Stick To Beatin Me, If He Can't Even Stick To His Crew!?
out of all the best personal

since it's 10 lines in all i give you a 7.5/10 because of the GOAT line that was played a little

EnVy Ny

First Off Your Wack Couldnt Blow The Roof Off Even Bursting Ceilings
Strap Bombs To Your Heart Cuz Im Planning On Hurting Your Feelings
the punch was there but it was verry weak, i've seen better from you

Your Punches Are All Thoughts N No Action Like Cyber~Sex
Take A Pic Of My Dick Cuz Even If U Bit I Still Bring Harder~Copy In Text
this was played, no one mentions dick lines but 1st line was o.k.

Brooklyn Raps Like Light~Weights Cuz His Dickriders Cant Be Held Down (Metaphor Lol)
If You Thought This Battle Wasnt Faire (Fair) I Label Brooklyn The Clown
nice personal & punch but 2nd line was half assed

I Rip Brooklyn Like It Was A Slammin Dunk Contest Cuz Im Slammin Brooklyn All~ Across~ The ~Net (internet)
Putting More Shots In This Fag Then A Emergency~Vet
NO Effort! 2nd lines are getting blah, 1st line was a punch but it was played

He Gunna Throw Beef In The Air So He Can Say He Raised The Stakes
His User Name Is Brooklyn But Where He Is From Isnt No Mistake(From: No Where)
1st line was exellent but 2nd line didn't make much sense at all

overall i had to give your verse a 6/10
you had too much weak punches an played lines

Overall: BROOKLYN




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