^lighten up on the kid, all of you . . this is hip hop . . not a clownin' session . .

add some emotion to your voice .. dont be afraid to get loud .. it sounds like your reading off a piece of paper .. its just you and the mic .. noone else .. work on your flow a little bit, just practice, practice, practice .. it took me 8 months to even establish a voice .. audio takes patience, determination, and heart .. if you have those three things, you can do audio .. if not, put the mic down now and go back to text .. either you want this or you dont ..

stay up
pz.1