this was good, solid drop

i liked some lines more then others, mainly cos i think they were structured better and flowed better:

I'm droppin more than just bars... theres a hidden message in this shit,
With the motive of hate, I motivate with my spits,
Show the fake that theres no playin when I say I'm legit...

this was nice, the content was good, although the rhymes were obvious, the content made them more original,

i think you could improve on spittin on more of a structure, cos i did nt feel the lines had any limits to them:

retrackin and fallin into another labryinth when I'm tryin to get outta debt... I'm out for respect,
and I aint plannin to get it by dissin you, I'm just straight dismissin you and endlessly deplinishin

had these lines, and you also had these sized lines:

so when I quit... IM THROUGH... I aint gonna keep sayin it.
So talk that bullshit to another mother fucker that will take it...
Most people miss the entire concept of rap, its an art...

BUT YO, content and wordplay wise, i would say you strong, i would like to see other spits from you that concentrate on the other things,

NICE DROPPING, keep at this, you got mad ability,

and yo i told you i would give you feed, peep my spit "let loose",

PEACE