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say dawg... you peeped my shit... so ima return the favor...
unlike my shit, you had structure... and it was a lot easier to read.
you had a lot of great lines... these two were my fav.:
power fuels the TEMPATATIONS, but IGNORANCE ignites VIEWS,
circumstances make EVENTS, but media creates the NEWS
you also had some wordplay to throw into the mix and I picked up on it... and last but not least on the complements... you had fucking OUTSTANDING vocabulary... this is what boosted your spit and made it a very very nice peice....
the only weak point I saw during your spit was the ending...
you kinda left me hangin and I was scrollin down to see if you had more... but its cool though... just dont forget to finish strong.
VERY VERY NICE DROP HERE... I wouldnt be surprised if you won a lot of battles on here if you could throw in some punches...
A.T.
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