i like how you let your emotion out and your views on the way the world is going today, i liked the easy read and vocab, liked how one thing lead to another
i didn't like how you used barely anything from YOUR life
but other then that it was a great drop and u should get into battling
p.s take the link out of ur sig or u will be banned...
check this out:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79338