this was kinda ill,i agree wit understatement,tha gangsta shit,it makes your flows sound trivial,emcees rhyme about real life situations,even if thats a real life situation its boring,nothin MOST of us on here havent seen, i liked your style at times,

this was your best attempt at wordplay and it was pretty ill,probably my favorite line.

[from the passive hits to yo head
i got massive hits~and clips of lead]

other than that u need a lil better vocab,better structure but u got mad potential.keep spittin god.~1~