well,u got potential but a lil too much eminem in ya rhymes [my life is a preview, I'll diss you and still wont get a source preview]

just changed up a bit,your style needs to be improved,you skipped around on what you were sayin too much,and even though u know what you were talkin about,we dont,aiight vocab,a little repetitive but u can improve,keep elevatin.~1~