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Old 09-12-03, 10:27 PM   #3
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alright...you need to elavate..try putting your rhymes right under one another so we can catch the flow easier...vocab was lil but im sure you can improve as you keep droppin...good read i liked some parts...but try to make something that even out shines ya self...check my drop out called venom...an keep workin man it'll help for real
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