Message...check
badass delivery...check
rythm...check
rhyme...who cares.
I liked this piece overall, but to me it felt more like the notes you make while writing all put together. Just a little more elaboration and reworking and this piece could shine even brighter than it does. THat's just my opinion though.

peace

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