Aight. Synteaxt, your Punches Are Ok.
Your ryme Scheme, I dont lIke at all...
It throw the Flow off in my Opinion.

Saracen..your Ryme Scheme was a little Better..
you Just Used Multies your First few Lines.
Your punches hit a little Better too...

Vote-SARACEN..



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