I'll stand and shout.... YOUR NOT GOING QUIETLY... INTO THE NIGHT!!!!!/

^wasn't that a line in Independence Day?

oh well i don't think this was like a poem i just think it had a lot of emotion and though i am sick to fucking death of hearing about 9/11 i thought this was coo. you had some pretty good vocab and as i said before raw emotion but i didn't really feel it cuz of the topic. i do think it was well written though.