hmmmmmm normally i don't dissect poems here..............but this one was actually a thinker to me.............perhaps i read a little bit more into your lines.............first of all i think the "girl" in this piece may have been a bit of symbolism........as most of the theme seemed to be focused on more of a nature and it surroundings....maybe mother earth is the girl?................there is a nice flow to this and it has a overall gentle feeling to it..........soothing just a hint of emotion which lies under the surface.........regardless of your intentions with this piece it was a nice relief from the maddening deppresive anger we sometimes get into in Poetic Scriptures.............1