Yo! you structure the lines just like me man... lol... check it out...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=78996
so you know this shit was definitily easy for me to read and find that flow in it...
Anyways, like I just said, shit had a pretty good flow, shit was short but it didn't seem unfinished, like if you stopped in the middle of it, know what I mean? so that was good, I was feeling the vocab too...

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