ok
kool-
i slay vets~but this gay "sucks" ...so ima lay-tex//(lay text)
only time hes "ridin his luck" is in gay-sex//

^^setup was blah and played, second line(punch) was ok

mc81 sees lots of breasts........when hes at kfc!
his bars are like underaged clubs they cant fuck up me//

^^very bad bar, but only because your order was messed up you should have set up with the clubs line and made he punch with the kfc line.

bitch!...i'll slam you like a fifth quick//
this kids spits "relatively sick" when his sister touches his dick//
mc81 is "posin dead" look at his sig//

^^horrible setup, ok punch. Third line was decent.

bitch you know...you aint elite thats why your crew is so low//**
your "dickriders" are pissed cuz your status is too little to blow!!!

^^not bad at all, best bar in your verse if you ask me, good setup and punch.

Overall-5/10 didn't really feel your verse, poor setups. Your punches were ok, but not too hard hitting. The finisher was nice.

mc-
Please Kid, Dick And Fart Raps? I Wanted a Challenge For This Win
Dismiss This Kin, Cuz He'll Never Be 'On Top' of His 'Game' Like 'Scuba Divin'

^^didn't like that. Weak opener.

All Ya Doin Is Rappin Ruckus, Plus His verse Is Lackin 'Punches' Like 'High School Wrestlin Matches'
Quite Honestly I Could No Show Me This Win, Along Your Verse Here's An 'L', Even You Knew To 'Attach This'!

^^great setup. Punch was stretched but decent.

250 Posts To Vote? Fuck That! Even Newbies Knew I Won This Shit... And You Wanted This In Elite?
Drivin By The LandFill Is The Only Way You 'Pass Your Place In Society,' Now Realize Deafeat!

^^I liked that line, the "realize defeat" part was kinda blah, but good bar nonetheless, creative.

Kid I Throw Punches Like 'Kool Aid' Giveaways, Now I Told You Before This Loss Is For You...
Hulk Out On This Kid Like He Spilled My Dew, Have The End Check IP's, You Didn't Even Vote For You!

^^besides the fact that you rhymed you and you, lol, I think this was the best bar in your verse. Nice solid setup and punch.

Overall-6.5/10 wasn't feeling your verse too much either, punches were ok, bu it beat kool's by a little, flow was nice, but some of your lines were stretched.

Punches-mc
Flow-mc
Wordplay-mc
Structure-mc
Vocab-mc
Creativity-mc
Opener-mc
Finisher-tie.

Mc edged him out in every category, but this battle was closer then the breakdown shows.

Vote=mc