Thread: I go HaRd MoTha*uCkAz
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Old 09-13-03, 01:34 PM   #3
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it was pretty good... i think you cud devolap a lil more vocabulary...an a lil better flow..it fell off at points..but like us al...elavate.an keep writtin it'll help yah increase structure an shit lates
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