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Old 09-13-03, 01:49 PM   #5
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i agree wit pot1ent..but yo you have potental you can see its there...check out your posts before you post em...it may let you realize your bars...but it was iight good for a newbie...an up your vobab a lil...i liked this part though it stoood out to me...

Niggaz is sick... Still tryina run tha game
And none of y'all motherfuckaz gonna take my fame//

its super simple prolly cud'a reworded that an made it better wit'a meta or summin...but for a newbie its iight juz elavate like us all peace check out my shit.."different teritorial Flow" peace
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