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Old 09-13-03, 02:12 PM   #2
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short but sweet.. i liked the content.. an this rhyme here

if you ain't nice, hate crimes on fake guys
the gay kind, "c'mon blunt play nice"
fuck that, i'm-a never double back on 'n'attack
i'm-a just inject a venom ta get um slumberin' fast

that was cool...i think you could have made it longer though an brought some more intencity an structure...but it was good for a short read..later
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