What can I say? Erm, it was bland, I believe this was more like a rap piece and not a poem, I thought it had no real emotion in it and I just never really enjoyed reading it, maybe you should work on structuring your poems a little better to make it seem as more of a poem, I never liked the rhyme scheme in it. I think it seemed forced and not needed in most parts. Basically I think you were trying to be like the thug rappers who tried writing poetry to help them in their songs, I think it just came out wrong, and I dont believe it was really on the topic of apologies either. Keep working though.

Love.