this was the best bit:

Niggaz is sick... Still tryina run tha game
And none of y'all motherfuckaz gonna take my fame//
Stupid bitches and shit wanna claim me as one
Afta I cum in their mouth when they bust my gun//

and it did nt really say anythin i not heard, or seen before,

its not that its bad, its just not elevated, basically, you just need more spits under your belt, and your whole game will improve,

the structure was aight, flowed ok, but the wordplay and content was newbie/gangsta stuff, i don't real feel it but, you hav got potential if you keep droppin.

PEEP MY SPIT "LET LOOSE", PEACE