Well i do feel like spittin, can you handle what i write
for instance, can you handle barking dogs, late at night
barking louder and louder, when you're trying to sleep
don't act a coward cus cowards, get sent six-feet-deep
i can handle defeat, but i don't like to lose at all
in battle with me, you should brace yourself for a hard fall


this was aight, you tried to keep consistency in the structure, it fell abit, but you got it back in places, flowed aight,

the content was soso, this is the area you need to improve, try and increase the vocab you use to rhyme with, but don't over complicate it, good solid drop, keep it up and you will get good...

PEEP MY SPIT "LET LOOSE" FOR RETURN OF FAVOUR....