wow u need to learn to endure proper critisism......ur the fuckin idiot......wtf was that bullshit u wrote up there????.....ja rule????.......wtf r u thinkin?......hes the whackest nigga out there........anywayz......most songz dont come from poems.....get it straight......u need to take bad critisism.......dont expect all good....damn......i havent been on this site ina while and now i kno y.....cuz of whack niggaz like u.........u really need MULITS, VOCAB, and all the other criteria's to build a proper flow........so dun....ur ass needz to elevate..........and yes ur the fuckin idiot........lmao @ u.........i kno i'll rip u............im out......elevate bitch.......