yo this was a nice spit, i felt you was on a higher level in the first 8 or so lines:

Worst nightmare cursed with this scare that is temporarily
Impares our standards when compared it leads to disparity
Needs charity cuz the manner of lyrics are layed derranged
Brains lack charge and spark and starts to strain conveys
No longer flames should of dissuade himself not to create
Well he didn't he was just playin so they could spot the fake
Fresh thoughts don't infiltrate but he hesitates to spit bars
Dealing with a disturbing situation, now sits another scar

i was feelin them, you was kickin knowledge, good wordplay etc, and the rest was aight, but not as good or as inventive/creative as the first,

i like your wordplay most, because you say it like poetry, and it flows good, the structure was fine, good spittin,

KEEP DROPPIN...."PEEP MY SPIT "LET LOOSE"....PEACE