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that was aight for a first spit, you tried to make it flow and structure throughout, but i think that is the main thing you gotta work on e.g:
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yo take that advice son,,,,,soothe out the words and your words will come together naturally,,,,ya pushin sentences and makin the last word rhyme,,,,,chill out and think iight!!
Peep My Drop!!
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