this was a good spit, i think what i saw first tho, was that it was nt as structured as i like, but you made up with some pretty dope content and wordplay:

Now you want to fence-with words and not get offencive?
everything comes at a price a battle free(style) from me can gets expensive-
bodily damage plus career scars extensive-malfunctions to brains making your nerve responce inapprehensive.

that was pretty good, i think you could improve your flow tho, maybe that comes with the structure...

cheap rappers talken on they chump change cause they was chump changed-
im dicken anything within hump range.

LOL, that second lines funny mans...nice...

CREAM FOR CREAM IF YOU GET WHAT I MEAN-
YOU THINK YOUR THAT DOPE YOU’RE A&R IS SELLING YOU PIPE DREAMS.
With GOLDEN SHOWER festishes of gowing MAIN STREAM.
Im a one man team-with a team of guilletens-
a guilletene team that cuts rap cracks for mic fiends.

that was probably the best overall section, especially the a & r bit, that was good content and spittin,

i ain't too sure on your repeatin stuff e.g:

cheap rappers talken on they chump change cause they was chump changed-

but it was a good spit, mainly for its content and wordplay/vocab...keep spittin...PEACE

peep my spit "LET LOOSE" AND DROP FEED....