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Originally posted by ShEpNeY_zAnY
GUNNER- OK WORDPLAY & FLOW, SOME DIDN'T MAKE SENSE
FROM WHAT I SEEN YOU PUT "~" JUST TO SHOW THE 2 BARS RHYMED AT THE END, THATS POOR CONSISTENCY
BARELY PERSONAL & VOCAB WAS MINOR
J.DUBYA- OK WORDPLAY, PUNCHES I SEEN
NO PERSONALS, FLOW WAS OK
NO VOCAB BUT OPENER WAS BETTER THAN GUNNER'S, SO WAS WORDPLAY
BRAIN WAVE LINE WAS THE BEST OUT OF THE VERSE
VOTE= J.Dubya
^^dat very well explained....
VOTE= J.Dubya
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