aptly title there is alot of alliteration in this as well almost came off as poetic to me............of course "all lyrics are poetry even if it's fuck you" i applaud your commitment to using advanced vocabulary..........but aren't you worried about some fucking herb saying "it's a little too much vocab." all in all i liked the piece the only thing i didn't get was the message i think it got lost in the exercise..............good drop though..........1

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