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Old 09-14-03, 02:35 PM   #13
Baron Mynd
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Ehhhhhh, these kids are hyping this up too much in my opinion. .
The flow was its best factor, Skiddleez seemed to outshine you both as i read it, just an all around better verse, flow wise - content wise, he had no forced multi's, stuck to the topic, content was decent, nice use of internals to keep my attention - Thugz didnt really bring that element on this piece and you didnt space out the final lines after each verse, so when your supposed to be 'introducing' the next guy - it looks like the line is supposed to be in the verse. . lol. . you may wanna edit that out, iunno. I hadnt seen the topic done before, so that was original i guess, Chrous was a nice touch and Word Perfect had the multi's, i just couldnt catch the flow to his verse at times, he switches styles too much to really keep it down, he switches the pace at which its spit, and that throws me in text. .

All in all not a bad piece, made for a decent collab, your styles seemed to compliment each others, nothiong really 'standout' that i feel like quoteing, but it wasnt a bad effort. I Actually liked this, but its just conmstrcutive critisism, no one elevates any from being told 'it was dope' to everything they post. .

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