Heh. .
Not a bad piece, flow was basically on-point throughout, could possibly of used more multi's / internals to make it more solid, but to be honest - i felt this without them. I Liked the 'achillies hell' line, and also the "america's not perfect?!" line, they were easily the standouts to this piece, finish was rounded off on a humourous note, i think ive seen the topic attempted before but you did easily better than the last piece i read on this topic, all in all not a bad piece, i apologise for the short reply, but i believe the newer members deserve the longer feedback, just take pride in the fact i felt this. .

Eace-Pay!

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