I liked it. Strong on the vocab, there were a few lines that stuck out, but the whole thing was good.

'break knowledge, kick doors down with, hypontic POWER,
RIP those who obstruct path, remains like LIONS DEVOUR//'

'influenced by the INFLUENTIAL, the elevation is EVIDENTIAL,
establish a REPUTATION, like ILLMATIC its ESSENTIAL//'

also that ignorance line was on point, good drop here.