Hahaha, i actually liked this piece, it made for a nice change from all the other depressing or 'Life Sucks' type pieces that get posted up in here. . This was pure comedy, i was laughing through it and certain lines had me like.. "Werd." especially that line about they wont stop to talk unless you got a nice ride for them to get in. .

All in all not a bad piece, flowed pretrty nice, creative at times, some truth, could use a little help with multi's& internals but it made me laugh and i enjoyed reading it.
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