^ He Means Dont 'CAPITALISE' all the rhym,ing words in your verse, we arent stupid my man, we can see where the rhymes are - lol. .

Okay. . as i read the piece, the first thing i noticed was all the ...'tion's - dont rhyme like that if at all possible, it does tend to get annoying and repetitive,

yeh camarac, thats just my style, the whole capital thing is, because its text, the caps are THE emphasisin words, the words i want people to think about, but i know what your sayin, also the tions words prob don't rhyme too well, but i think if you spit it, you can make it sound well enough,

i liked your feed tho, i like critisicim, motivates me to silence you, hahaha,

o and its a 16 bar verse, i don't write songs yet, cos i don't see the point if i ain't makin them into audios, but i might drop some in the future....

THANKS THE FEED PEEPS, IF THERE ANY NEW GUYS READIN THIS...GET GIVIN ME SOME MO....

PEACE