not bad, homie. and by not bad I mean fucking awesome.
but I try not to sound eager. I'm insecure like that.
only thing that was messed was the flow in some places. seemed like the words didn't really fit together, like tryin to put a puzzle piece in the wrong place. the shit don't work.
Internals were nice, and your topic was really well portrayed. Jae never finishes a text collab. I've seen at least three of your pieces that were from a collab with jae where he didn't do his verse.
Quote:
I'm the black sheep asleep under our Family Tree
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that line was superduperparatrooper doposity. great finisher.
Peace out, Sloth Tickla!