Not a bad piece my man. .

Flow was pretty decent as io read it, could of been tightened slightly by using more internals and multi's but it wasnt too bad, i liked the concept actually - just wish you'd of tried on this piece instead of posting it as a keystyle because this could of turned out pretty nice. You raised a few good points and actually rounded off the piece on a high note - i thought the last line was the best in that verse actually.

Eace-Pay!

Oh, And Reply To Mine Feat. Abolish! = )

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