ok gonna break this down
Cameron
Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man
He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan

^^Michael Strahan lines are played, you tried putting a creative spin on this, but its still played.

Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs
He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words

^^First line was nice as hell, but I didn't really like the second line, just wasn't feeling it.


Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland
What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman?

^^setup was bad, but you made up for that with a nice personal.

I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with
Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic

^^setup was blah but DAYUMMMMMMMM nice punch prob the best in your verse.

To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace
And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets

^^this was kinda stretched, but decent finisher nonetheless.

Overall-decent verse. Some punches hit hard, others were wack, but props to ya. 7.5/10

Mentally Kursed-
Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills//
Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal//


^^horrible opener, had no flow to it whatsoever.

Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest//
Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”//

nice bar, good use of multi's, you combined them well with your punches here, nice.

Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest//
Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists//

^^once again, you lost your flow, punch was bad here, blah.

Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift//
Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift//

^^good use of multi's, but this did not hit very hard.

Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face//
Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case//

^^once again, good multi's, but choppy flow and punch was not hard-hitting.

Overall-I've seen much better from you, this wasn't your day man, punches were off, flow was choppy, the only thing I liked were your multi's, which are of no use if you can't combine them with punches. 4/10

So

Punches-Cameron
Flow-Cameron
Wordplay-Cameron
Structure-Cameron(MK try not splitting your bars.)
Vocab-MK
Multi's-MK
Metas-Cameron.
Opener-Cameron
Finisher-Cameron

VOTE=Cameronj86