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Old 09-15-03, 11:59 AM   #11
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Vote BK

BK just had alot better punches.. His whole verse was more
consistent than Pot's............................................. ...................

Further Explanation

Pot1ent... your setups didnt connect to make any punches

ex
I'll slice up ya hands so you'll be true to your name
Bare Knuckles or Wackness?.. there both the same

how does the first line connect to the second... calling him wack
isn't a punch... that bar is just filler

Is winning in range? when he gets L he'll beef over it
You try to incorporate advice in spits cuz he uses tips

how does the first line connect to the second... & it seemed like
you put "Is winning in range?" just cause it rhymed with your
last bar... this bar is just filler as well

Im not saying you dont have potential... but you aren't developing
your concepts the way they should be... wording is everything

Peace