A diss track, right?
Again - i couldnt catch the flow to this piece, you change it up too many times, the lines are all over the place in your verses, wordplay was subtle, i caught most of it, probably need to know all the beef to get it all but i got most of the punches and such, nothing really made me go O_O but it was decent, multi's and internals helped it a little, a couple seemed forced as i read it but im guessing they flow in your accent, writers voice wasnt too apparent in this, structure could be switched to make it easier on the eyes, blah at a ten out of ten, nothing is EVER ten out of ten, theres always something that can be improved - a true emcee knows that.

Reply to mine Wpord, and no bullshit one sentence reply neither = )

Eace-Pay!

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