Lmao At An Open Mic About A Guy And His Car. .

Nce original concept, ive never seen it done before! Flow was good throughout, it read nicely for me from start to finish, good structure to the verse, made it easy foir the reader to get into in my opinion, you stuck to the topic throughout, BUT a lot of the rhyming was basic, try using more Multi's and Internal Rhyming in your future pieces to add a little more complexity to your stuff, because ANY emcee can write a piece rhyming one-syllable words together, just look at Nelly, lol.

Anyways, the potentials there, not a bad rhyme structure, decent flow, original concepts [ lol ], you just need to upp your wordplay / multi's / internal rhyming and possible takje a shot at doing a piece involving imagery and emotion - see how you do at those pieces because they are more difficult to pull off.

Reply to my piece feat. abolish.

Eace-Pay!

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