Tobias did take this one, despite the fact that he stole his alias from a lackluster series of children's books (see: Animorphs' Series). Unfortunately, Front Lines voters seem to emulate and vote for the writer who includes the most dick and/or cum and/or mom-lines. .
Quotables.
Tobias
Quote:
Rhymin like shakin hands with sweaty palms.
Drippin not spittin leavin 1st impression bombs.
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best line of the piece which, unfortunately, isn't quite an accolade. .
Lionello
Quote:
besta inject ya lines wit steriods if u wanna hang-on-
lay down ya strap-on an stay-on...
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The search for something even remotely quotable was, in actuality, hellacious. . This was the best I could come up with, I suppose!
VOTING SCALE -
wordplay - Tobias
punches - tie
vocabulary - Tobias
structure - Tobias
flow - tie
VOTE: Tobias
CRITIQUE
Tobias: Punches sucked - sorry
. . Incorporate humor into them, use Current Events/Sports -- whatever!
Lionello: Work on flow. A LOT.
Poll voted.
-Amby