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hey girl i really feel like i cant relate to this piece, i can almost see old memories playing in my head. its amazing! lol

the beginning got my attention by the second line, and you kept it there, althou alot of stuff in your poem is stuff you hear everyday over and over i knew i was going to see something new and unique appear. the first 2 thirds, had a great flow and sounded good, even with the aabb setup, it worked, but the last 1 third got a little rougher, more raw, but with that came more emotion, and alot more personal, you made it YOUR piece which is great.

nice drop

~Tera~
DONT HATE

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