'tis was aight. Even for a keystyle. I keystyle everything I write.

Simple throughout the whole thing. Where you shined though, was the in the flow. The flow was good and consistent throughout the whole piece. Also, you have a topic, but in the piece there really wasn't anything the reader could grab a hold of, to say "oh so thats what this is about", it seemed a bit empty and shit, but it was decent.

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