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Old 09-15-03, 04:57 PM   #6
A.T.
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Aiyo....

MIND MELT- you had a good flow goin and some fuckin ill ass word play... your vocab. was decent and you had a few punches that I really liked... I like your style.
Overall you had a good spit... your last two bars were fuckin ill as hell and I think thats what made your spit good, cause you had a strong finish... I rate this shit at an 8.

prophecy- your structure was way off and your bars ended in some odd places and it threw your flow off... I couldnt quite grasp it until like the middle of your spit, but once I caught on to it, it was pretty tight man... just keep ya structure in check and you'd be doin better... your vocab was decent, and your wordplay was also pretty good... your punches werent hittin too hard and that kinda dropped it for ya too... just keep at it and better ya structure... I rate this at a 5.

vote- mynd melt...