Nice lines at sometimes, but at others it seemed a bit lost.
The Flow was ok, hard to catch at first, but it was there.
You heard this before, but it definately needs structure.
I see that your just fucking around in this piece, which is
why it was kinda retarted at parts, but it wasn't even half bad.
You did overdo it with the multies though lol.
Actually, you should try this style a bit more, if your just experimenting, but fix your structure up, and add more to the flow and less of the multies. But nice drop.

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