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Old 09-15-03, 05:35 PM   #12
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I'm trash'n this wack cat, av "ass-ess's" his lack of skill/
Dope's Mc's from Rhode Island?, naw just "Rhode Kill"/

"Aisle" murder ya, and put ya rhymes on da "shelf"/
Mak'n music fo' da poor?, ya must sing ta ya self /

^this killed the battle


Breakdown
Punchlines-close but E
Personals-tie
Metaphores-E
Wordplay-E
Disses-E

Overall E motion killed this! Very nice verse bro.

vote-E.Mo Tion