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Old 09-15-03, 06:38 PM   #7
Crysis
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KOT VERSE
*Brooklyn stand up and witness the execution*

let's see how much shit you talk when I introduce you...machete to throat...
you now regret what you spoke so you had to change ya name cause Purple Haze already been smoked...(herb)

^played,weak, and stretched^

so keep running ya mouth and talkin' shit out ya ass...
you finishin' last if ya crew'z "Da Nastiest Artists" then stupid ass just give em a bath...

^weak but ok nonetheless^

when I shit on you...you gonna catch hepatitis B and A...
and that will be the only sickness incripted in ya "DNA"...

WTF? ^weak as fuck^

you like to see men play...and then ya semen sprayz with envy...
don't tempt me to murk you cause I'm on "real time" while you on Tim. E....(fag)

^stupid^

overall verse rating...3/10 (atleast it wasnt as bad as some of the newbs)



Tim.E. Verse
Im Spitting It All Out..Time To Go Hard..Damn Kid That Was A Joke
This Battles As Easy As Opening Coke..You Got The Audience Screaming "Bo0o0 You Shouldved Chocked"

^weak but nice multis^

This Faggot Runs With The Worst Crew On The Site..Time To End His Career
Death Is Very Near..I Got This Match Wrapped Up That This Faggots Shredding A Tear

^not very effective but once again, nice on the multis^

His Ass Is Shivering In Fear..Aww Whats The Matter Is My Skill Too Much To Take?
Your Skill Is 100% Fake..Came Into This Battle Confident Now Your Saying "Fuck I Made A Mistake"

[b]^not any punches but it flowed well^


Time To Slay Thee With My Stake..Naw Thats Fiction But A Good Murking Is Your Reality
Im Gonna Launch You In The Air And Define "The Arts Of Gravity"..My Punches Got Ya Confused You Cant Even Tell Your Own Sexuality

^some ok wordplay, could have been better^

Yea That Line Was Stretched But Its Better Then Your Whole Verse
Im Taking This Battle In A Hurse..Trust Me Your Whackness Is Not Classified As A Curse

^nice flow but not much anything else^

He Thinks Hes Cool By Stealing His Moms Purse..Well Hope You Had Fun Cause With These Lines Ive Alrdy Won
Your "Phat"..No I Mean You Weigh A Ton..I Hope Your Ready For Your First Loss Cause Your Ass Has Been Sonned

^once again nothing strong but nice multis^

OVERALL VERSE RATING - 5/10 (ive seen way better out of you...but it was still enough to merk this guy)

[b]Vote - Tim.E. Tumurk
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