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		agree with previous structure critiques. 
but I got into it... 
I say this cautiously but it was a gripping verse. 
 
i would......in a certain situation.... 
however i have no concept or idea of your relationship and therefore cannot pass judgement. 
I will only say that you should make a decision while in an objective state... without forgetting why subjectivity plays a role. 
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