New to RB
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IP:
agree with previous structure critiques.
but I got into it...
I say this cautiously but it was a gripping verse.
i would......in a certain situation....
however i have no concept or idea of your relationship and therefore cannot pass judgement.
I will only say that you should make a decision while in an objective state... without forgetting why subjectivity plays a role.
Peace
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