ill break this down bar by bar, as fair as possible.
Forget the facts you've gathered, Mentally Kursed's a typical gay man
He "tackles" and "sacks" men better than the NFL's Michael Strahan
ehh ok.. ill give this 6/10
Mentally Kursed must be a "verb" cuz he's on my "to do" list for eliminating herbs
He's checking readers digest to make sure I aint stealing text cuz he's eatin my words
second line was confusing, first was ok, 6/10
Ya verse'll be far from perfect, even beneath the surface is bland
What the purpose of comin hard in verses if ya idol is megaman?
lmao, nice personal 9/10
I'm like Kazaa and kidde porn, on the computer... I'm nothing to mess with
Fuck a friendship, only way "i'm your "dog" is if you're dsylexic
wasnt feelin it, 5/10
To boot I got the lyrical heat you can't stop it, blaze a trail like Rasheed Wallace
And I'm quick to shoot, like NYPD cathing black men reaching for their wallets
pretty nice 8/10
overall- a good verse with a few nice punchlines, i was feelin it though...
34/50
Repeatedly eatin fruit loops is the only time he consecutive kill, commit color suicide by overdosin on purple pills//
Your from Bermy, this cereal killer robs “banks for sperm” givin him a reason to steal//
lol... solid punch 7/10
Punches separate your jaw from your mouth and your heart from your chest//
Put you to rest, sendin “books” through your stomach so youll have “readers digest”//
very good wordplay, not much of a punch but very nice bar, 8/10
Your flow dont make sense like Helen Keller judgin a dance contest//
Like Cams the best, ill leave your chest caved in like Bin Ladin and terrorists//
LOL made me laugh, and im not in a good mood so thats hard 2 do right now, 7/10
Ill rip your face off they lay it on a ELEVATor so you can have a face lift//
Hits quick and swift, disperse a bullet through your brain so your thoughts shift//
pretty good pretty good, 7/10
Yours fists connectin is a illusion, punches leave you wit delusion, bruises on your face//
Your blood is on my fists, callin C.S.I to match the trace and the F.B.B. to solve the case//
whats the FBB? good setup bar and lost me on the second line. 6/10
35/50
damn that was some close shit.. its almost impossible to make a decision, both verses were very tight, and its down to the last point. MK wins by one point. he had a more consistent verse, he only had one or two that stood out, and cam had some good punchlines, but had some confusing bars and lacked consistency.
i broke this down as much as possible.
vote-
Mentally Kursed
hit this up honest, no DR BS..
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