i think it was okay but honestly it like this................remember this is only my opinion and it dosen't mean shit..............you started with a format and a vague theme..............towards the end the theme changed which is cool but you also changed your format....making it a bit confusing to me.............now overall i think the piece had an exceptional inner meaning..........but when you change so abruptly in a writing style it turns some readers off.....i still liked the piece keep dropping..........1