my smoke fading pipe fools me into sharpening my tongue with a bladed knife~

^sounds a bit like Van Gogh only with a toungue.............this could be about you struggling artist fights to have his voice heard.....could be about life..........did read like a verse........but content always told me "all lyrics are poetry" so in that regard thumbs up...........didn't really see any "thug rapper" stuff in this so i don't know......................and for the record Paul poetry dosen't need to be structured in any typical sense........the writer writes it the way he wants it read.............good drop...............1