That’s how it started, tried harder, and had the heart to go public, pondered my style whether thug shit, mainstream or raw verbal slug shit, half of the time on some dumb-shit, but still to rhyme; yo I loved it//

^^^sick fuckin line... was a great peice dawg... you have GREAT potential... i wish more newbs would take the time like this and pour their heart into a open mic that worth something... thank you... good job dawg