lol at that^^
aight here i go
and i know a scar is uncontrollable, like the moon controlls the tide\
umm the moon does control the tide
There are some i this world that say, words are like nails in a fence-
you can put them in and take them back, but they will always leave the dents\
And the dents cannot be fixed, they can only be forgot-
but usually they are remembered, more times then they are not\
my fav part...
the flow was easy to find it had a slow mellow tempo... the use of metas was good... the vocab used was also good... overall i can see why u spent time on it...came out well
*straight newb move*
PLEASE take a look at this...not a battle, not an open mic..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79927