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Old 09-16-03, 01:16 AM   #3
Mr.Christensen
Fuck You, I Rhyme Better
 
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lol at that^^

aight here i go

and i know a scar is uncontrollable, like the moon controlls the tide\

umm the moon does control the tide

There are some i this world that say, words are like nails in a fence-
you can put them in and take them back, but they will always leave the dents\
And the dents cannot be fixed, they can only be forgot-
but usually they are remembered, more times then they are not\

my fav part...

the flow was easy to find it had a slow mellow tempo... the use of metas was good... the vocab used was also good... overall i can see why u spent time on it...came out well

*straight newb move*
PLEASE take a look at this...not a battle, not an open mic..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=79927
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